Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Ph: Poetry Writing: Surfing Memories Comments

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Although good lines are not accidents
How I love to surf an old memory that
Floats into consciousness, a fall colored leaf,
With hues never seen before, its heart exposed,
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Brian Johnston
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Kim Barney 28 February 2018

Loved the poem, Brian. One line really surprised me at first: Ah! It is good to be old, and then I read the rest of the line, and I understood. We really do have treasures in our memories and the things we have learned in life. Well done, and I doubt you are as old as I am!

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