Ph: Poetry Writing: Sometimes When I Wake Comments

i see you made at least one change i suggested. here is another: Reader's may not get a poem you are sure is good, .........Readers! ! ! ! ! ! ha ha. i plan to change it and put this into Section A of November's showcase, my friend! AND yes! different people like and/or understand different things. GOOD POINT! it will cost you a truckload of Dr. Pepper to have me change it back to Reader's. :) Friends are not just ones you choose but who belongs to you, ..........maybe belong but i'll leave it belongs. IMPORTANT for PH poets to remember! : Criticism not unkind it's just another's view. [unless it is from Troll] not bad. thanks for offering this for the showcase AFTER i nudged you. i nudge about 40 'friends' every month and about half of them respond with a poem or more OR tell me to help myself, to which i am agreeable. as long as NOT everybody expects ME to do 'all the work'! ha ha bri :) ok. i'll rate it: 8 1/2. call it 8. thanks for the rhyming.