Friday, October 16, 2020

Ph: Poetry Writing: She (For Whom The Snake Coils)revised Comments

Rating: 5.0

Does danger dance to flutes played by your breath,
emerge from basket's depths to haunting tunes?
It's superstitious myth that weaving snake
can hypnotize and freezes victim's feet
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M Asim Nehal 16 October 2020

A fantastic poem with lots of information to uncover the myth and superstitions attached to King Cobra. Nicely written.5***

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