I guess I don't know when a poem is done,
There's no bell that goes off, no starter's gun
Which signals to me a new poem's begun.
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......I must appreciate the efforts you've put in rhyming, truly no one is perfect here, our success lies in our mistakes which often become visible in light....................this ode of yours is beautiful write, having wit and humor.......
when a poem is birthed, feels like it being done but yet unfinished. lovely write, Brian.