Ph: Poetry Writing: Love Letter Comments

Prolific poet of all time....Brian has swayed me away with another lovely romantic poem. Although you are considerably old, your diction is youthful and very touching. Although I am a fan of blank verse, I still enjoy regular rhymes with such schemes as you have used. Whoever was your 'Ardella' in this poem would definitely smile after reading this poem. 'Heart of my heart' caught my attention, the metaphor seems to suggest how important this person is to you, considering the function of the heart as central to life itself. The day it stops beating, you stop living....I bet you, this phrase skipped Shakespeare.ha! Beautiful and emotionally stimulating. Keep writing!