Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Ph: Poetry Writing: Just For Fun! Comments

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What do you say that we take a break
From all of our old routines,
What would it look like, how would it feel,
Do we even know what that means?
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Brian Johnston
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Abekah Emmanuel 19 August 2015

Seriously! Brian composed this amusing piece? Well, it is an amazing work of art filled with sarcasm, wit and fun. I like the reference to the 'Tea Party' and the 'Supreme Courting'. It makes interesting understatements. I also like the comparison of your love to a slant rhyme in poetry. It is such a great thought. Well done sir!

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