Monday, September 7, 2020

Ph: Poetry Writing: A Devolving Disaster! Poemhunter's Editor Comments

Rating: 4.7

On the Loss of a Friend (Who Still Lives!)

Though it happens quite seldom, a friendship can wither and die
on the vine that we may not see coming, and pain smokes a peace
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COMMENTS
L Milton Hankins 16 September 2020

Brian, although you are my ONLY favorite poet on this site, I must say your lengthy notes seem somewhat whiny in this case. Shame! Your poem stands quite nicely alone and as it appears here. I loved it! I did not love your critical notes. It's just me, Briah!

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Soran M. H 07 September 2020

Thank you Brian for this well penned Syllabic Verse, really we all facing these problems that you have mentioned in your Poet's Notes, the PH editors and management board has to look into them seriously and improve the quality of their wonderful site. 10+ for your amazing masterpiece and it goes into my treasure chest

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Ace Of Black Hearts 07 September 2020

Know that feeling well lol, The editor blows, as well making revisions on comments. Thank for sharing.

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