Monday, September 22, 2014

Ph: Poetry: God's Kind Of Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

The finite contemplating the infinite
The stardust male and female still flush with light
From exploding stars, seeding new possibilities, our true progenitors.
So that even God Himself must take note of our passing (in its season) ,
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Brian Johnston
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Savita Tyagi 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem reflecting human emotions of curiosity, wonder and amazement towards cosmos. it is like more we know more we get mesmerized. Poem brings that same effect to reader with much beauty and wisdom.

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Bri Edwards 25 September 2014

ok brian, thanks for being true to your challenge rule about length. i wondered if you would be true. i was going to split all of my lines into two lines until i decided my long lines were needed to make it fit into the challenge rules. my poem is better for keeping the lines longer anyway. guess what. i haven't read you poem here yet. but i'll get to it. i did read the comments so far. how many Dr. Peppers did they cost you? ? remind me if i don't comment on this before too long; i know you will (remind me) . bri :) now to send my poem entry to you.

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Dr.ram Mehta 23 September 2014

It's really a marvelous write on the vast cosmos and the infinite beyond our control. I enjoyed the poem, Brian

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Darlene Walsh 23 September 2014

The beautiful infinity of God, and all his creations from the great cosmos to the insignificant humans he loves so much, is expressed beautifully in this poem. Darla :)

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Valsa George 23 September 2014

This is a wonderful write! So much scientific knowledge in tandem with God's hovering hand above everything! A wonderful mixture of science and divinity! Enjoyed much!

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Abekah Emmanuel 22 September 2014

With this amazing poem... The arrangement and the style is as beautiful and succinct as God's kind of poetry. indeed, you have penned it down with utmost experience and maturity. keep it up!

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