Saturday, September 6, 2014

Ph: Love: Would That Our Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Would that our love were constant as the Sun,
Who though He needs his daily rest too,
And slips under the cover of earth's horizon
To find such bliss as He can without us
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Brian Johnston 26 September 2014

This poem previously was rated at 2 votes for an 8.5 average prior to Merov's recent 1.0 vote. But I am so enthralled with Merov's judging skills that I am awarding my own poem 3 ratings of 10.0. For Merov to give me a 1.0 clearly means that the other two voters were less skilled in thier judgment.

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Darlene Walsh 09 September 2014

I'm a big fan of the sun, and it's heat. Of course I need to be careful, if not covered up when in the sun too long I burn red as a cooked lobster (or is that a goose? lol) . I like the way you personify the sun as someone we can count on. Even my dog likes the sun, he likes to lay on his back sunning his belly.

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