Ph: Love: Under Your Blue Sea Comments

Full of feeling and loaded with life. Freely flowing and beautifully blowing like breeze. Well done my friend!

i loved reading it...it is wonderfull...keep writing. please come and read my poems, it have been a long time to get you reveiw.. hope you'll come.thanks!

let me live and die under you, wonderful and true love - 10

Let me breathe beneath your waters, Live and die under your blue sea, The delight of sons and daughters, Share with God what He meant to be! .......................most beautiful lines in the poem....flows swiftly like ocean, yet bores that scent and hue of an ocean/..............