Monday, September 15, 2014

Ph: Love: Thinking You Are In Love... Comments

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What happens that pushes you over the edge,
That makes you walk out on that limb?
Is pain what convinces you that love is real
Or just fascination you feel?
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Abekah Emmanuel 16 September 2014

Love does not control but gives others free rein, Takes joy in the loved person's dreams, In true love you see comes remarkable shift, The other's joy becomes your gift Indeed, we must not love someone because of the benefits we will be enjoying, nor for a particular selfish reason. Love is liberal and does not exercise any authority over any one. When you love someone, the person's dreams becomes your dreams, her troubles becomes yours and is her joy. A very romantic but wonderful poem. Great job!

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