Friday, January 22, 2016

Ph: Love: The First Kiss Comments

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Always a surprise
That you want it,
Kind of sneaks up on you,
Even bigger surprise when you are kissed back,
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Valsa George 22 January 2016

But then for me A kiss was never just experimental, And foreshadowed a love That might last a lifetime, A kiss in my mind had integrity, Always meant something, Diaphanous specter of a promise, Raging hormones not withstanding! ............. This is the testimony of one who never toyed with love and who attached much sacredness to man- woman relations! Great write!

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 22 January 2016

.. Love is the only language spoken here, And weather is always temperate, Every soul is naked in that light, Basking all day long in rays of smile. Excellent work. Enjoing. I congratulate you for this poem. Thanks for sharing it, dear poet.

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