Saturday, December 27, 2014

Ph: Love: Oh, Let My Love Like April Rain Comments

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Oh, let my love like April rain
Wet the essence of your being,
Saturate your skin until I am
Its smoothness and the shine
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Brian Johnston
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Valsa George 31 December 2014

This is a lovely poem Brian! Reading it on this New Year's day is like being cooled by April showers! Wish you and your family a Great New Year of health and happiness!

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Abekah Emmanuel 28 December 2014

Very inspiring and rich in poetic diction. How interesting is it to know that, while I saturate the skin of my friend, or in this case, of a woman, and her hair, I am not really doing anything which many may regard as sinful, but rather, in the words of BJ, I am But simply to contributing to God's plan for her life in some small way. This is a brainwave for sure. I like how you give a very precise, metaphorical and humanistic meaning to God's plan and Grace on our lives. many are those who misunderstand these two terms, but I believe, this poem will go a long way to help them. Nicely written....Well done!

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