Oh the air is not so sweet today,
Nor, I fear, will it be tomorrow,
For disgruntled love has left the fray
Of tortured wills that brought both sorrow.
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This work has it own sentimental value, because i found you have writen it by heart which you felt it and drown words and place it here to be read, yes you exhibiting your mind and feeling...it is good one, you know poem is a media to tell what we have inside either we realize it or not..thus i appreciate this poem, i can grab the feel inside the words..._Soul
Exceptional expression, intelligent handling of the language and syntax, and an impressive result. Very good poem, sir. G.