Sunday, April 27, 2014

Ph: Love: Now That You've Gone - 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh the air is not so sweet today,
Nor, I fear, will it be tomorrow,
For disgruntled love has left the fray
Of tortured wills that brought both sorrow.
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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 May 2014

Exceptional expression, intelligent handling of the language and syntax, and an impressive result. Very good poem, sir. G.

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Unwritten Soul 28 April 2014

This work has it own sentimental value, because i found you have writen it by heart which you felt it and drown words and place it here to be read, yes you exhibiting your mind and feeling...it is good one, you know poem is a media to tell what we have inside either we realize it or not..thus i appreciate this poem, i can grab the feel inside the words..._Soul

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