Ph: Love: Lost Loves Comments

Had there been a place like that, The lost loves would have been rescued. Could they share there sorrows and pains, Possibly may be a little lightened........ Wish that place is found one day For the lost lovers to console............................

Brian, I had never heard of this legend about elephants, it is unique as is your poem. Beautifully written, it gives some hope to those hoping to be reunited with a lost love. - A place where perhaps they might not feel so lonely, and can dream that they still have a chance - that line resonated within my mind - it's rhythm is stuck there with your words. I love it! Thank you, this was definitely a treat to my heart and mind. RoseAnn

If there exists such a place, I am sure it will be more populated than anyother place on Earth. There must be many who have found their love gone awry at one time or other in life..... What a wonderful rendezvous it would be and with what thrill and zest lost lovers will be heading towards that venue to have the bliss of being united with his/her lover! You have beautifully meshed together this idea with the elephant legend...! Thank you for your invitation to read this great write!

This is truly one of the most engaging poem I have ever read. It is beautiful in its sequence of creativity and love Brian. Excellent poem and thanks so much for sharing it - shobana

A beautifully-expressed poem. It brings to the surface the sad feelings about love gone awry. In our hopelessness, we find hope... and our tears serve a new purpose. In denying love is dead, we keep it alive. And who knows, it may just be in a coma - there may still be hope.

If there is such a place, I would gladly like another chance to dance with a lost love. A glimmer of hope, you provide, that love awaits throughout all time. Lovely! PEACE