Saturday, March 23, 2019

Ph: Love: Kim's Birthday Party Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I 'gayly' reflect on your birthday tomorrow,
I've reason for pause both in joy and in sorrow,
But give me 'three minutes' and know, take this in,
That forever I'll love you, divorce too, a win,
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Brian Johnston
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Bri Edwards 30 April 2019

oh, Kim (from your past, not 'present') ....you confuse me, BJ! ! ! ok, i've finished reading poem now. " And learned to suspect more opinions of others" ...i suspect you DO mean " suspect" , not " respect" ! This poem is BJ; what can i say? why the mention of " eugenic" (eugenics: given a bad name by A. Hitler?) ? ? yes, if a guy looks at a gay woman, it can still give a tingle, but " enjoy" ? well, if you say so. bri :)

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Kim Barney 24 March 2019

When I saw the title I thought you were congratulating me on my birthday, and came to tell you that my birthday isn't until October! I enjoyed reading the poem anyway. Thanks for posting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

Through the expression of love and friendship, you have beautifully presented the message for birthday party of Kim. This poem is truly very brilliantly penned.10

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