Ph: Love: If I Kissed It Comments

Glad to sacrifice life for love's meaning, If the purchase costs me only time, The entire poem is Beautiful Brian! I smile twice! A big 10

though this is a revision of the poem you sent me, here is the comment i prepared for the other version; is the other version in your list, i wonder; i'm SURE it is! ! ! maybe i'll look for it. ====================================== favorite stanza/lines: When you're gone, I can get so impatient, It's like somehow life's rhythm is missed, If this simplest of verses can bring you some joy Then smile twice, for you just have been kissed! .................i 'love' it! ! ! ! ! VERY nice. i'm don't know if i understand it completely, but i object to none of this. perhaps one of my favorite of yours, though i'd rather it were NOT a 'love poem'. ha ha. i'll use this text, AFTER SOME EDITING, in my/our March showcase..........in ITS ENTIRETY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! and..... to....... . MyPoemList! bri :) thanks.