Ph: Love: If I Could I Would Be… Comments
I. The ground fog that rises from dappled fields
Full of the scent of the earth and all living things,
Musky like dirt and fragrant like flowers,
Floating like wedding sheets,
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But unanswered still my poem's quest, ‘If I could I would be' ground fog, rain, Or bright red balloon, but why? One answer sure is poetry is born In images like these and I would please A heart that grasps what image tells, Though mine be poetry's most flagrant verse… The one you notice… Indeed I have noticed it, such a sweet scented verse that attracts the attention of the reader........Although you are not a fan of the blank verse movement, you seem to express yourself clearly in this tradition, I enjoy it....so succinct.Keep it up!
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7/31/2025 2:31:41 AM # 1.0.0
Very intense and absorbing. Beautiful imagery, tempered with sage advice, and a gentle appeal to be noticed. Well, fear not, this poem was indeed noticed. Just wonderful.