Ph: Love: How I Would Love You Comments

i'll take the warmth; i'll pass on the smoke! ! but not TOO much warmth. i'll have enough of that after i die! ! favorite lines: Though without a breeze to stir, it Twists and curls in shapes fantastic, and Simply let my love in passing Echo truly what He's given, Magnify His glow around you, Content just to play my part. ============================================== Hint I'm ever in your orbit Gravitas that has no choice. ................i don't understand your use of Hint here. do you 'want' a colon ........................................................................after it? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - grav·i·tas ˈɡravəˌtäs/ noun noun: gravitas dignity, seriousness, or solemnity of manner. a post for which he has the expertise and the gravitas synonyms: dignity, seriousness, solemnity, gravity, sobriety; authority, weightiness a man of gravitas antonyms: frivolity - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - too much 'love' and 'god' for MyPoemList, but........................... i DO like the poem. :) thanks for sharing. care to have it included in October's Section A? ? no pressure! ! bri :)

Very Beautiful, And Meaningful!