Ph: Love: Before Dawn Breaks My Heart Comments

Life is dominated by pain! The feeling that we are not adequately loved dispirits us! But not everything is lost.... a rainbow of hope still is seen arching in the horizon and we discern that love is the antidote to all our ills! Let the new morrow dawn with brighter shine! A great write!

A lovely poem that gently asks just a small favor of love. So well written, and imbued with deep feeling.

With soft and flowing rhymes, BJ pens down a deep emotional and thought provoking poem once again. As we wake up every morning, many thoughts feel our minds, but as rational beings, we have the responsibility to feel our minds with great thoughts, for only through that, do we act great and become heroic in our deeds. When we choose to live out of fear, we fear to live and remain unconcerned to the affairs of the world. Though we dont know when our lives shall come to an end, we can contribute our quota towards its development of and that of others, thus bettering the world. Since we cannot cheat nature, lets not remain silent but join the poet to whisper what we feel! Great write BJ. keep it up!

Loved reading your poem.