Saturday, March 1, 2014

Ph: Love: A New Reality Comments

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You touch my battered heart
Like the feathered wings of angels,
You burst from my poor eyes
Like the tears of awakened love.
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Brian Johnston
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Shobana Gomes 05 June 2014

I think the essence of this poem just reverberates and I love the whole imagery that you managed to capture with words. Excellent Brian - shobana

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014

A beautiful heart-catching poem on perfect love. Imagery is outstanding, it brings the words alive, I can feel and touch them. Too bad the malcontent can't capture the beauty that you so easily can. Great write, Brian. Love it. RoseAnn

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Sreelekha Premjit 09 March 2014

I think this is a good poem. Well written!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 March 2014

Your breath seeds sounds of rain (Like distant drums) soothing my fears, Your presence feeds my verse Like mother earth’s most verdant dreams absolute beauty in these words!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 March 2014

Your pen fills the ink of hope to flow freely on verses of love where each words were glittering like twinkling star That's the beauty of your write.

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Lorraine Colon 01 March 2014

What a lovely poem - such emotion on display. It appears no part of you has been left untouched by this consuming passion. This kind of love only comes once in a lifetime - so rare!

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