You touch my battered heart
Like the feathered wings of angels,
You burst from my poor eyes
Like the tears of awakened love.
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A beautiful heart-catching poem on perfect love. Imagery is outstanding, it brings the words alive, I can feel and touch them. Too bad the malcontent can't capture the beauty that you so easily can. Great write, Brian. Love it. RoseAnn
Your breath seeds sounds of rain (Like distant drums) soothing my fears, Your presence feeds my verse Like mother earth’s most verdant dreams absolute beauty in these words!
Your pen fills the ink of hope to flow freely on verses of love where each words were glittering like twinkling star That's the beauty of your write.
What a lovely poem - such emotion on display. It appears no part of you has been left untouched by this consuming passion. This kind of love only comes once in a lifetime - so rare!
I think the essence of this poem just reverberates and I love the whole imagery that you managed to capture with words. Excellent Brian - shobana