Ph: Life: The Unknown Heart Comments

I love your poem, good work, keep it up :) , I saw you giving advice to someone in your comment and I was wondering if you could check my poem and tell me if there is anything wrong, thanks: D

a wonderful ending in this poem, , , Dare to explore the unclaimed heart, Even if it's your own, Ask your friends what they feel, To find out if your feeling's real, Show them your heart's not stone, And feel your own life start