Ph: Life: Telescopic Dreams Comments

ok, a rating? 9 :) bri

What? ! no Poet's Notes! i like the rhyming. here is the message i've already sent: BJ, reading Telescopic Dreams now. i can imagine fungus in someone's shoe, but............photons? ' super bright decaying flash, '.............is this why some 'twinkle'? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 'sidebar'? ? the third definition? : - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 'side·bar ˈsīdˌbär/ nounNorth American noun: sidebar; plural noun: sidebars 1 a short article in a newspaper or magazine, typically boxed, placed alongside a main article, and containing additional or explanatory material. Computing 2 (in a graphical user interface) a narrow vertical area that is located alongside the main display area, typically containing related information or navigation options. 'Windows Explorer's sidebar is a great place to house shortcuts to your favorite folders and other tools' 3 a secondary, additional, or incidental thing; a side issue. (in a court of law) a discussion between the lawyers and t ================================== i thought stars were hot. where does the 'snow' come from? ? i never quite got the feeling i understood the linking of words in the last stanza, especially the last line, though i read it at least 3 times. what does 'dreams' refer to, my friend? - - - - - - - - - ok, this is on its way to December 2016's Section B of Showcase of PH poets. Thanks. bri :) ok, for people who don't know what 'brave's moccasin' and 'snow' mean in this poem, send a self-addressed, stamped envelope and a funny poem to Bri Edwards, and i'll tell you.