Ph: Life: Ode To A Missing Beer Comments

favorite lines: Oh, this is an ode to my friend's missing beer, Gone missing in fact because he isn't here, and When friends cannot make it remember this test, Though company's fun, a full stomach is best. to MyPoemList, and, because it is YOU, i'll rate it also: 9 1/2.........call it 10. bri :) ========================================== this part of my comment is the same as i just sent to you in a message: Brian, i'm loving this one. did he ever find out? are you forgiven? ? my only suggestion for a change: The one thing for sure is I’ll sleep good tonight. maybe: The one thing for sure is I’ll sleep. Good night! But WAIT, i see that i misread I'll sleep good tonight as I'll sleep good night! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! my error! ! ! ! NOW i 'love' the WHOLE POEM. i'll get it into Feb. Section B (i think B) showcase soon, maybe tonight. my mate gave me more time on computer because i was a good boy today and she got a late start fixing supper (not that it was broken!) . bri :)