Thursday, May 1, 2014

Ph: Life: Damaged But Still Salvageable! Comments

Rating: 5.0

So just what does one do with oneself
When your life knocks you down more than once?
Do you just plant your ‘tush' on a shelf,
Or frame your act and pass as a dunce.
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Brian Johnston
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Yash Shinde 02 May 2014

No words for this one Brian! ............ Now you are doing what exactly I wanted you to do, this poem is filled with passion and hope.... And this time my friend you've felt it with heart. The title is really, really catchy and captivating...... The things you've described happens often with us, yet the last stanza instills courage and motivation! ......... You've really come to my expectations........ I loved this heartily, though I found some example irrelevant.............. This one has influenced me greatly, and sounds like a tale of a failed Indian student. People could really relate with thine write (which was fairly difficult for them to do before) , This will be loved heartily by Indian students, and worthy enough to be hung in learner's room.................... This undoubtedly goes my favorite poems list!

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Theodora Onken 01 May 2014

Loved this one, Brian!

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