Sunday, September 23, 2018

Ph: Life: Attachments To Lost Causes Comments

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There are times that it happens, it's hard to let go,
If it does, don't blame others, but look deep inside,
But don't put yourself down, for most guilt is a show,
It's quite probable you're only caught up in pride!
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Mahtab Bangalee 23 September 2018

great writing on syllabic verse- all to lost causes- like to quote last stanza- You may shout, Change the world! That's a good way to die, The sane man works on self! Let life's fools face their choice. It's their best way to learn, though of course, some won't try, Just be sure job gets done! Make success your clear voice!

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Tim Curtin 23 September 2018

Baubles become faubles…. Deviation from expectations can cause pain and misery... Best to leave the unknown quantity and stay with the old reliable ….less you sink the entire ship.

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