Ph: Humor: The God Machine Comments

i looked up passe, per se, and tawdry. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - taw·dry ˈtôdrē/ adjective adjective: tawdry; comparative adjective: tawdrier; superlative adjective: tawdriest 1. showy but cheap and of poor quality. tawdry jewelry synonyms: gaudy, flashy, showy, garish, loud; tasteless, vulgar, trashy, junky, shoddy, shabby, gimcrack, chintzy, kitsch, kitsch; informaltacky, cheesy, schlocky the tawdry rings she wore on her fingers antonyms: tasteful sordid or unpleasant. the tawdry business of politics noun archaic noun: tawdry 1. cheap and gaudy finery. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - last stanza a shift in rhyme scheme. acceptable, though i did not, for some reason, notice the primary rhyme scheme very much when i first read the whole poem. maybe i was too busy trying to follow some of the 'story'? this may be one topic/poem in which i would have preferred less attention to rhyming and more to other things. - - i wish your machine could have kept you from leaving the apostrophe out of it's, AGAIN! ................... ....think that its bad form to cover-up! ....... :) :) :) :) - - - - IS THERE something wrong with parental wealth? but let all be equally wealthy, with money, kindness, good health, and common sense! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - please DON'T take death away, UNLESS you guarantee a happy life for everybody always, no matter what their age is. that would take some doing! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - Humanity endangering MY plan Just plankton in the future's yawning maw Machine judged only advocate for man! 1. maybe you meant Humanity-endangering, MY plan? 2. yeah, feed BJ to the whale! 3. the machine is judged (by the machine?) to be the only advocate of man? well, Brian, though YOU seemed to have some worthy goals, i guess i might have to side with the machine in its opinion of you. you are flawed! but aren't we all? [except me, OF COURSE] thanks for sharing. better luck next time with an idea [controlling God! ]. you'll need it. :) :) :) bri

Beautiful poem on humour topic. it IS QUIET UNIQUE poem shared in forum. Lovely tribute shared.

Is there where I cast my vote B.J. for god?

you are in Paul Davies camp, Brian. He's a humorist, too