Thursday, November 20, 2014

Ph: Humor: Hey Bwana! (1) Comments

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Banana tree here! Bwana quick sit with me
Come sit with me friend for a spell
These damn tsetse flies are all out for our blood
By now we all know them quite well!
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Brian Johnston
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Bri Edwards 25 November 2014

OK! ! ! ! i remembered. AND i even gave it a 'thumbs-up. i don't do that for 'just anyone', ya know.

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Bri Edwards 25 November 2014

i'm not sure if In African village we no got de fence is an italian joke or a british-spelling typo. hmm? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Still half flies bite you and not me. .............. at first i was picturing flies, bitten into two pieces, still flying, and biting Bwana. NO, that could not be, i told myself. even BJ isn't that weird. maybe bri edwards would write that though. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bananas are fruitful you know! .................nice one! ok, i'm sending this to MyPoemList, (if i don't forget!) . - - - - - - - - - - - talk/stalk............almost-brilliant rhyme here. and i 'love' the stalk line. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - you had to sneak God in, didn't you? tricky. but i didn't mind, really. :) bri thanks for sharing. is this the one you said you wrote for me?

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