Ph: Humor: Awakening (Echo Poem) Comments

well AT LEAST you acknowledged a friend's contribution! ! ! you DID change it enough, i guess, AND you have (i think) four more lines; i did NOT count how many words each poem has. did your friend give her/his/its poem a title? ? ? if so, let me have it! AND is Awakening the title of both yours and the friend's poem, OR is it the title you gave the combined Echo poem? ? i LOVE it. to MyPoemList. and maybe? to a showcase, later this month or another? ? ? i especially enjoyed YOUR: I love to go to sleep each night For rest I always prize, And wake each morning somehow... Though to my great surprise! and YOUR: No coffee boiling in its pot All missed their morning tea, A world stripped of its atoms... With nothing left to see. and THE FRIEND'S: Everyone else woke, As was their lot, But no coffee for me, As I did not! OK, rating: 10 + 10 = 20! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! at a boy! bri ;)