Saturday, March 29, 2014

Ph: Holly: If Not For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

‘If not for you ‘Bri' I might have hated all men'
Sobering words my ‘little sis' said to me,
But just where it happened, or even when,
Is a window through which I can't see.
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Roseann Shawiak 31 March 2014

Well Brian, this poem is brilliant, so true picture taken in time, just a moment set forever in literature. Absoluetly love it, Brian. Keep em' coming, I'll keep reading them, Thank you for this little moment in your life. RoseAnn

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 March 2014

This poem, a photograph of a moment, Pain, tears and fear stirred well and then shaken, Of all families, a component. Lovely indeed!

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Colleen Courtney 30 March 2014

Nicely written piece! It's nice to see sibling love. Keep writing!

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