Friday, December 11, 2015

Ph: Haiku: Global Warming Montage Comments

Rating: 5.0

1:
planetary caution
shards of ice slow river's flow -
wet dreams in winter
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Abekah Emmanuel 13 December 2015

Wonderful chain of haikus! I like the shards of ice slow river’s flow - that gives birth to wet dreams in winter...such interesting thought. ha! also, the personification of the 'broken season's spirit' that causes a 'humpty dumpty' earth is beautiful. A concrete imagery I suppose. And of course, as seasonal creeps get closer, the future, as usual, cannot be known with certainty. The last one seems to be hiding something interesting, Is Brian suggesting to us that, his haiku is just like urine that is being as used as an ink in writing in snows? ha! I believe he will answer that. Great works of artistic value! Keep it up!

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