Ph: Haiku: Fun: Lessons Women Taught Me Comments

............great job with this collection....I enjoyed each, to difficult to choose a favourite.........

(1) As long as a man does not share his feelings openly, a woman will always doubt if he is truly loving her! To love a person one has to know him intimately! (2) If someone keeps thinking of himself and his poems only, naturally the others will see him as self absorbed......! (Ha....Ha!) Just joking! (3) Even though everything is revealed, a woman's feelings ever remain a mystery. This subsequently leads to a break up! Yes, Enjoyed this trilogy of haikus, Brian!

I like this trilogy, especially the three stages of insecurities. Being a divorced man myself, I can see in my own experience that progression which takes on a kind of wholeness which just might lead to closure. I hope it does for you. It's still a work in progress for me. BTW I couldn't get the gist of the Physics-inflected haiku - I tried to figure out the individual images but I'm missing something. Your notes were interesting!