There's a soft glimmer of day on the horizon
As a vanquished sun is swept away by dusk's dark flow
With a slender slip of a cloud stretched North to the South
That floats on the sweetness, the texture of marmalade glow.
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This is a beautiful narrative, flowing like honey in the sun ....... smoothly and sweetly. There is a lot here for the imagination to play with. Descriptive phrases become images in the mind without any difficulty. Enjoyable reading, indeed.
Brian, this is an exquisite poem, especially well-written and bursting with wonderful word images brought to life with your casual rhyme and rhythm. Thanks so much for sharing this with me.