Ph: Faith: Rosemary's Bliss Comments

bruce springsteen, the bible, and cosmetics sales are what i think of (after doing some googling) . an interesting rhyme scheme, done well enough for me. this shall go into the June 2016 Showcase of poems in my PH list of poems. i guess Rosemary will be better off with Bliss than with Rosemary's Baby. bri :)

i especially enjoyed stanza 5. a decent job keeping up the rhyme scheme. and i think i made some sense of it. of course it helped ome to have some Christian experience and to know something of your God-leaning way. good enough for June's showcase on my PH site, in my poem list. [of course i have NEVER rejected a poem some PH friend dared to send me! ! ! ! ]. ha ha welcome aboard and thanks. bri :)