Wednesday, July 2, 2014

Ph: Faith: Paradox 101 Comments

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The cities now razed and man's dreams carrion,
Our country, theirs, stench egalitarian,
In processing bodies, oh, just what was gained,
Victory is where, now the battle has waned?
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Brian Johnston
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Luana Del Lobo 15 July 2014

I might not believe in god though I think people should speak freely their opinions and I think you did it in a really good way! Liked it! :)

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Roseann Shawiak 04 July 2014

Very intense poem, Brian. It does seem that death is man's only détente. There is always killing and bloodshed throughout our history of mankind. We don't always understand, it's true, about God's sacrifice. Good spiritual aspect. Thank you, RoseAnn

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