Saturday, July 18, 2020

Ph: Faith: My Last Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

My last breath is coming and might soon arrive
though I don't know the day or the hour of its birth.
It's a marriage some dread and for others, life's bread,
or deep drink from the well that some dream ends all thirst,
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Richard Wlodarski 19 July 2020

I shall pray for your soul, Brian.

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Rajnish Manga 19 July 2020

Just now I have read another poem with about the same theme but with a different treatment. I loved reading both the poems. This philosophical churning intrigues as well as enlightens..

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so love.. I liked it.. very much deserving..10 Remember - One thing Sunday,19th July 2020 people may like or not move and get over what is not not there! if it has to come. it will but don't kill in advance with fear Hasmukh Mehta

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Brian Johnston

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