Saturday, December 7, 2013

Ph: Faith: If Children Count You As A Friend... Comments

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If your smile is effervescent,
If your time's always a present
You love to share with others,
Not just family or brothers,
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Brian Johnston
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Roseann Shawiak 11 April 2014

Loved this one, Brian. Yes, children are the best at immediately seeing through a person and are great judges of character. Thank you, Brian. RoseAnn

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Unwritten Soul 08 January 2014

I know dearly that if we have just close to the ones we feel loved to be with, its like we own the mountain of everything....as life is nothing but to collect meaning and value in each second we have..no need to be saint we could be anything that be something for them..so be sweet and delicious is on you..._Soul

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Shahzia Batool 16 December 2013

I can see your logic here, yes, sometimes we can't give any value judgement on our writes but they make their mark for one major reason, and here is one present too...winning of the heart of children is really something...these are not the children portarayed by william golding, but the innocent forces of the Divine law, uncontaminated by the world dark currents! ! !

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Mike Barrett 11 December 2013

Brian, Great - loved it, pat yourself on the back at least 3 times! By the way, as a teenager in Saint john N.B., I played hockey with a Brian Johnston. And a pretty good player he was too! Cheers!

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Rlizabeth Eabbit 11 December 2013

I really like this, it is true as well, children seem to have a much keener sense of who is good and who isn't; a childs opinion is everything. All the same, lovely write :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 December 2013

this poem has an intensely soothing touch! great write, Brian.

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