Friday, September 8, 2017

Ph: Faith: Easily Distracted Comments

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Is it that time gets away from me
Or that every second has its own story to tell
And that my circuits get overloaded at times?
In truth, some seconds are astounding:
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Bri Edwards 24 September 2017

the poem was going along so well. then: and then it's brother! ! it is brother? i doubt it, young man. hee-hee. [ as you probably have heard, forming the possessive of 'belonging to it' is an exception to the general rule of using an apostrophe. i think i'm saying that correctly. ] and OOOPS! ! ! are poet's too you know, ...........i guess you can't be handsome, a farmer, AND good at forming some words. : ( ha ha...........................poets? ? for some reason, my favorite lines: Is it that time gets away from me Or that every second has its own story to tell And that my circuits get overloaded at times? In truth, some seconds are astounding: bri ;) don't be teaching Abekah S. Dakota English! !

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Brian Johnston 24 September 2017

It really was a test silly to see if you, my favorite 'goof detector, ' was losing his grip. Thought sure you would miss the second error! A double header! Ha!

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