Sunday, May 28, 2017

Ph: Faith: Crop Failure (Bitter Harvest) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The past can't tell the future; I'd almost forgotten this,
The past six years had brought me higher yields than average,
Though expectations soared, now nada, nothing, zilch.
Our wheat fields decimated from the lack of rain.
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Satish 11 November 2018

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Abekah Emmanuel 01 June 2017

So interestingly, Brian is now a fun of free verse? I see......I definitely knew a day would come where he will free himself from the manacles of rhymes and express his thoughts without barriers. I was right after all! Now this is a beautiful poem, though the lines seem too long for me(of course is a free verse.ha!) I like the political satire embedded in it, especially in the last stanza. This interestingly funny. But should we blame Republicans for crop failure? ha!

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Brian Johnston

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