Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Ph: Evil: The Wages Of Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bush in which you hide
Reveals your cowardice,
The wall, behind which you speak,
Testifies against you,
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Professor Plum 25 September 2014

Not bad. Really good ending.

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Abekah Emmanuel 24 September 2014

Will there be a time in the future when mankind will be free from sin? All human struggles to understand and distant ourselves from sin reveals our cowardice. We should simply like that which is Good and the General Good of Humanity(Do I sound ambiguous?) to avoid all things evil. I like this poem so much.....indeed, the wages of sin is nothing but....the destroyer of birth-Death! It is candid in theme.Well written!

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