Saturday, June 28, 2014

Ph: Echo: To Love Is To Surrender Comments

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It's true that she loves her tears most of all,
With her tears she starts every day,
Could this be how she earns her pay?
I keep wondering, what's in it for her?
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Roseann Shawiak 17 August 2014

A woman afraid to let go of her past, and allowing it to taint her present and future. A love waiting for her, to kiss her, yet she sees nothing and turns from landfall - from love. This is the meaning I got from it Brian - Is it close to what you thought while writing it? ? Interested in knowing - if you will tell me.. Creative and full of imagery, all of it pulling my feelings in different directions - another good one! Thank you, RoseAnn

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A beautiful poem and wonderful creativity in words and emotions and I liked in that spirit.

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