Ph: Echo: Being At Choice Comments

First, the concept of Echo poems, novel and well carried out. There are some brilliant lines, and that does not mean others are just average. Novel rhyme scheme, 'maybe Gershwun would work better..., may be, may be not, the poet decides, and then there are half rhymes.

The original sound and its echo so brilliant , thanks for sharing.It will go to my favorite list.

favorite lines so far: I'm awash in the colors of rainbow, With my soul breathing soft like a tree, was it Joseph who had the coat of many colors or daniel or.............. no! not brian! ! and the breathing soft like a tree brings to my mind the soothing sounds of a moderate breeze moving tree branches. - - - - - - - - nice 'echo' nice flow, and worthy effort at the interesting rhyme scheme. maybe Gershwun would work better. :) ok, for YOU, a thumbs up. but remember: i don't do thumbs, up OR down, usually. i let my words speak for me. bri ;)