Ph: Death: Some Thoughts On Leaving Comments

If ever I forget to wake, Don’t let me go, for heavens sake, .. nice lines....10 if ever that shall come never as you will not know the final call

I love the expression you painted on this heartfelt poem..it is definitely one of my fav from your collection_Soul

How wonderfully touching - loved this poem Brian.

I loved this one! I've to change my fav's list fast! Now this one's my favorite from your collection. A really lovely sweet and romantic poem, you'll surely leave your muse weeping if she finds this upon your leave, a really sweet poem dear. I loved the you consoled her, but don't you think even this letter of your won't keep her from weeping? I would love to address this to my muse. You've started penning from your heart! This is what touches one's heart! ....goes to my FPL! .

If ever you should leave, know that you have left your mark on those who care to read your words...sweet simple sharing of the soul. To those who sabbatoge what should be about poetic sanctuary, herein....shame on them for the tarnish they leave. I believe all poems worthy of being read...if not enjoyed, simply move on to tH next. I too, have received 1.0 ratings....but I still love My poems as 10. Like rainwater off a duck' s back.....PEACE my friend