Ph: Challenge Poem #b - 'Where Did It Go To? ' By Brian Johnston Comments

never kissed? a great rhyming word (mist is even better) but............hmm? ..............you had a great relationship, stolen by a dragon, and she wore a ring, but you NEVER kissed? or you used to but stopped? i wonder. i like the poem very much. its overall message perhaps is that love and relationships do not always endure the circumstances around them. thanks for sharing. bri :) p.s. i just reread it to check out the rhyming and i found this; i think there is a typo in the second line. I do not pace blame, On circumstance you endure, - - - - - - p.p.s. i think *Sunprincess* does not get it. holding tight does not always work! and it is not always worth the trouble. of course this is said by a man who's been divorced three times! but i'm content in my fourth; content enough. of course i didn't say my wife is content! !

........a beautiful message in this write for everyone....hold tight to your dreams....hold tight to the ones you love...enjoyed reading this one..

Simple and well written