Ph: Challenge Poem #a - 'shampoo In My Eyes' By Brian Johnston Comments

........this beautiful poem should be made into a movie....for adults only.....truly enjoyed every line...

Lovely piece. Shampoo in my eyes... it stings.

I really don't know what all the fuss is about. Don't you guys ever take showers with your ladies / lovers / wives? Has no one ever told you that cleanliness is next to godliness. : -) Shoot, even drying dishes she has washed can be a sensual event. Life is short! Take time to smell the roses is my advice.

Woah sensational and i enjoyd d romantic creativity. Nice to know westerner ladies let their hair long too. Cant imagine myself shortening the long hair.

Beautifully expressed expectation of impending romance. Shampoo, like smoke, can get in our eyes and we fail to notice. Such is the power of love. Another wonderful poem from your pen!

beautiful, the lover inside never ages.