Ph: Bible: Science: Humour: Digital Creationism Comments

Ahhh Mr Brian... u've missed an important personality here, the super hero Mr Satan, without him the whole drama of biblical's creation is literally dull and boring, and even this binary code won't be decoded if satan gets subtracted. Don't u see that his presence proceeded all the acts and scenes of the tragedy of Genesis. while reading your this poem, my mind recalled the famous documentary on BBC (the god delusion) by Professor Richard Dawkins, i m sure you have watched that. i wish to comment on the contents of the poem but then decided against.Anyway the poem is good, stanza are gracefully titled and constructed and i like the rhyme too. u r right the poem need to be revise and should annex with more events and details, i m sure it turns to be a new paradise lost. good luck.

For my own limitations I cannot go deep into the meanings of the poem but I feel it is a beautiful and mystical poem of belief and the concluding para of the poem in epilogue is the conclusion of the thoughts which I feel as wonderful with nice feelings.

tears and joy - embracing, I like it, thanks,