Friday, May 23, 2014

Ph: Bible: Humour: Beelzebub Vs God! Comments

Rating: 5.0

His cloak's foul tent is what supplies,
The darkness for the craft he plies…
His lair, 'The Father of ALL Lies.'
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Brian Johnston
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Yash Shinde 24 May 2014

That's wisdom delivered in Brian's style! I like the way you made this poem funny, as in here- Victims who enter there “to cope, ” Soon find themselves bereft of hope, Like insects caught in toilet’s slope. ! ! God is always, a way better than Satan, though he may delay, but yes he'll respond (just like Brian!) ..From the day I've met you, your poems are becoming wonderful steadily! I loved this one, which delivers wisdom in such a fun manner! Kudos!

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Lorraine Colon 23 May 2014

Well said, Brian. We all have been warned now to keep our distance from that guy with the funny name. Great poem!

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