Peter Featherhead Comments

but, Wait! i think when i was five years old i had a blues band called Peter Featherhead; you MUST change the title! ! :)

no wonder the title didn't sound familiar. reading some comments and responses, i see you changed the title! but you COULD have just added a little word, right? since i've commented before, i won't do more now. others are waiting to be read. bri :)

Love the way this one flows and the imagary is very good indeed. Annette

Just wrote my first poem from a child's perspective; its difficult to do and still make it imaginative and create adult-sized cred. Loved yours! I think when I was a child, I was Peter Featherhead! Check out my Sweet Cherries which will be published in Frosini's new Anthology for Children for Amazon's e-books. Marianne Larsen Reninger

Featherhead Is an Improvement! I think you made other changes, and I like 'them', IF you did! ! To MyPoemList. Bri 😃

I love this! I love the mystic feeling it gives me, and a feeling of excitement and hope. I am sure this poem would be loved by childre, indeed!

ok, i'll give you two days to correct Pumpkinghead! if you don't do it, i shall no lonker reed any of yor wourks! favorite lines: Sees the girl with golden hair Tuck her wings beneath the cape And smile at him from far away Across the coldness of the space. nice flow and even some rhyming! cute. bri :)