Thursday, May 16, 2013

Petals Of Peace Comments

Rating: 4.9

What life! For I know, it's a magical bag
I can see uneyed, the bag with its tag
Always empty, it has a gigantic desire
What a folly with us? Why bathed in pyre!
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Aftab Alam
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 January 2016

Verily, peace resides within us and our greed is the destroyer of our peace.......10

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Ken E Hall 08 July 2015

Peace within lovely message sadly too many have war within and this planet is never without a war and by its record never will...mindful to stay on that peace perch...thanks and regards

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2014

Lo! My bag is full with fragrance' Where is your bag holy man ‘Peace is nowhere else if you are in search Peace resides within you, with a merry perch

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Patricia Grantham 20 September 2014

An excellent poem on peace and well being. Your poem takes the meaning of peace to another level. It has to start within or there will be none at all. Only leads to misery. Well done.

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Heather Wilkins 13 September 2014

peace resides within you so true if we only try to find it lovely write

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Yasmin Khan 21 May 2013

Life's philosophy and message described in easy symbols...bags and petals of peace a fragrance in hearts is nice symbolism.

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Sallam Yassin 18 May 2013

wise and nice the message sounded very bright/ well done

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Excellent poem Aftab, poem flowed nicely, thnx for sharing

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Chandra Thiagarajan 18 May 2013

Oh! So lovely a poem projecting peace to the world! The last four lines are the high light of the poem!

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Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

the last two lines are fantastically written with beautiful rhymes.. love it..

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Valsa George 17 May 2013

Peace is nowhere else if you are in search Peace resides within you, with a merry perch But the greed that breed profound desire Creates ire, then fire and then pushes in mire ‘ Great lines unveiling valid truths! ! Love them! !

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an intelligent poem on peace..well said

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