Friday, September 15, 2017

Petals Of Musical Notes Comments

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Gently, softly, petals of tones and notes fall gently into this
mind, at times bringing tears of sadness through it's melodies,
touching the very within of being.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 15 September 2017

This is a poem of utmost sadness. How could it be otherwise? Your metaphor of the BLACK CURTAIN is uncompromising. I am impressed with both with the weight of sorrow you are carrying without giving up and your resolve to finish this poem to inform the rest of us: Prepare yourselves - you too will carry this sorrow-load The opening stanza, however, is a beautiful celebration of the MUSIC IN OUR LIVES.which accompanies us in sorrow and in happiness, helping us to cope, to understand, to persevere until the end - which will include blessed reunions with our loved ones.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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